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UNCOVERED: Chapter one of my shitty novel | History Defined
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the_avenging_knight (her/she) 2 years ago
This is pretty good! If you ever need any help (especially if you plan to add time traveling Nazis), please let me know!!
Jack Smith 2 years ago
Hi! I was looking at your profile a couple of days ago and noticed you posted this! I wasn't going to say anything about it, but I couldn't stop thinking about it because it got stuck in my mind for whatever reason. I'm a writer, too, and I couldn't help but notice you have a few errors in your chapter here. I doubt you'll see this comment, but I was wondering if you'd be interested in letting me edit your writing. If not, it's totally fine! I understand not wanting a stranger to mess with your hard work. However, you *do* have some errors, and I'd be happy to help you with them if you want.
the_avenging_knight (her/she) 2 years ago
This is pretty good! If you ever need any help (especially if you plan to add time traveling Nazis), please let me know!!
Jack Smith 2 years ago
Hi! I was looking at your profile a couple of days ago and noticed you posted this! I wasn't going to say anything about it, but I couldn't stop thinking about it because it got stuck in my mind for whatever reason. I'm a writer, too, and I couldn't help but notice you have a few errors in your chapter here. I doubt you'll see this comment, but I was wondering if you'd be interested in letting me edit your writing. If not, it's totally fine! I understand not wanting a stranger to mess with your hard work. However, you *do* have some errors, and I'd be happy to help you with them if you want.
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